Deeper Side
If there is something that lingersIt's that summer of 78 when the tall dark moon crossed the pine fieldsAnd bore a dream away.I remember her facecracked where the light layFrozen upon a split...
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I'd have to agree that we come to understand much with the years passing, such that if we'd only known...still, it's lessons we're all destined to learn. Great piece.DanWords are the mind's bridge -...
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We learn slowly by bitter experience and also by peak moments of happiness Alisdaire excellent poem
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This is very moving Alisdaire, there is beauty in every word, every stanza, every line... it shines. Beautifully expressed. ~Mystic~ "How could this happen to meI made my mistakesIve got no where to...
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beauty of ones passing thru the time remenancing of memories remain love the way you turn time with your ticking penangelasFrom the mind of darknessI embraced the darksideUnto my own suicideI am born...
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Alisdaire,Thank you for sharing this walk through time with us. Wonderfully writ.Annette
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Alisdaire, Tis always a privilege to read you..The sadness you built into your character shows in the following words which I quote:"There was a silence that filled every momentweighed her despair...
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